A Knight

June 22, 2008, 7:08 pm

A knight in shinning armor where are you? You have gone I am alone You went off to battle Are you alive? I long for my sweet knight Was my life with my knight destined to be? I shed tears this night...

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Re: A Knight

June 23, 2008, 12:21 am

really felt this piece....-"Now I am one"..... great line

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Re: A Knight

June 23, 2008, 1:14 am

Jackie ~ Sweet lament, poetess. I pray thee find thy Gallant at the last. Blessings, John

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Re: A Knight

June 23, 2008, 1:26 am

j i think there are many...on both sides of that armor that seek one another. dont give up hope... this was tenderly done. thomas

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Re: A Knight

June 23, 2008, 2:41 am

Mine is in Iraq at the moment but soon :) enjoyed the read :)

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Re: A Knight

June 23, 2008, 2:51 am

Tenderly and beautifully brushed Jackie. Much enjoyed :)

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Re: A Knight

June 23, 2008, 2:58 am

Was my life with my knight destined to be? Set in stone! Is this done? Are you gone? Hi Jackie, I love the questioning style of your writing. Very touching...

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Re: A Knight

June 23, 2008, 3:00 am

thats knights for you - glory-hounds... I hope he comes back to you in one piece!

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Re: A Knight

June 23, 2008, 6:38 pm

Thank you all for you kind comments. This came from my thoughts I don't have anyone in the military. I wrote this thinking about all the military fighting and how the spouses and family must miss...

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